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Victorious Pulling his hand from Lucas's blood stained face, Simon was victorious. Here is the back story. Simon is an average 6th grade guy with friends and OK grades, but he had a secret.Simon had powers and one day was destine to either fail his task in saving the world or succeed. Simon knew that the possible end of the world would be over the summer of 2012 (which was quickly approaching for Simon) so every day he would go to an abandon building that was said to be home to ghosts, (which is obviously not true) and he would use that place to practice his powers. So one summer day approaching the possible end of the world Simon goes to practice some of his powers but his brother followed him. His brother did not expose himself to Simon but watch his awesome powers. Jets of electricity, balls of fire, streams of water, chunks or rock, and blades of metal fly from Simon's hands.Simon kept on going to the house to practice and Lucas followed almost for half of the summer.Then the day came. Simon woke up with a start, but once again unaware he was being followed by Lucas. The outside sky was red and a big storm cloud was surrounding his suburban town, the end of the world was starting with his town. Then and there while Simon was about to take on the black cloud monster Lucus fell from his hiding spot. In that same instant an arm from the massive dark cloud came down and engulfed Lucas, carrying him back into the cloud. Simon knew what he had to do.He flew up inside the black cloud and found Lucas's now evil body laughing at his appearance. Lucas said "you can not stop the end of your world foolish boy." Simon tried to fight the black cloud but he could so he attacked his brother. (in regular time)Pulling his hand from Lucas's blood stained face, he had achieved victory.Simon then finished off the cloud and the world was saved.Simon is still mad to this day that his brother was an idiot and almost destroyed the world doing it.